Thursday, 16 July 2009
My Implications for future work
Even though sometimes these may differ, (such as the difference in my opinion to Tony Jones regarding the punting in Cambridge on the initial show reel) I have learnt that while working with a client it is always necessary to take notice of their opinions and sometimes, they may be making a good point.
I also learnt during the commission process that sometimes when the clients and my personal views are very similar or the same, we can create a very effective finished product which we are both happy with.
The commission process has ensured that my managerial skills, negotiation skills and confidence when pitching various ideas has been substantially boosted. In terms of working with clients in the future, I think the commission project has put me in a much better position than previously, as it has boosted the skills above and has meant that I now take greater care and consideration into the views of the client.
I also now due to commission, have a wider knowledge of deadlines and time limits working in the real life media industry. Although I normally always meet the deadlines set because I do not like to fall behind on work, in the commission project - the show reels, rough cuts of these and pitches and ideas had to be in for set deadlines which were much stricter than deadlines I had ever worked on before; this consequently led me to take more attention to deadlines and work harder to meet these and get everything successfully completed.
Another thing boosted by the commission project is the method of sticking to the brief of the client. While various other projects had been slightly more lenient with the brief of work, such as the interaction project and the music video project, this commission project had a concrete brief which also meant a lot of limitations. Therefore, this project has boosted my skills of working towards a brief with little limitation and this is something I will take into consideration when working in future commissions.
Tuesday, 14 July 2009
Influences from the changing spaces commission




Monday, 13 July 2009
Personal budgeting sheet for Commission

Feedback from Tony Jones for my individual show reel






Friday, 10 July 2009
My finished second show reel
Wednesday, 1 July 2009
Tony Jones client requirements

Saturday, 20 June 2009
Further show reels
In my opinion, this would be a little easier than the main show reel as I will have the parts chosen for me with Alex, and would simply add them together effectively. My show reel was created on the wednesday 24th June, working with Alex in a pair. We had to create our individual show reel, including 3 parts of archive footage, an animation from Depict 90 second videos, and a Bjork music video.
We had to include paperwork to list what was on the showreel so that it could be checked with the council and legalised. The showreel had a specific order, including logos before each video etc. Below is a copy of the paperwork for one video.
Tuesday, 16 June 2009
Measuring audience response and feedback

Saturday, 13 June 2009
Audience feedback - rough notes and tally charts
Friday, 12 June 2009
Audience response - 12th June

Thursday, 11 June 2009
Media coverage of the project - 11th June





Wednesday, 10 June 2009
My personal response to first show reel
The first cut from wednesday 10th June (PM) showed that some improvements were needed. While watching the show reel rough cut, I identified the following points as improvements.
• The animated logos, (completed by the visual effects team) were a bit too
advanced and ‘flashy’, perhaps being more simply animated would be better for the show reel.
• One logo appeared twice and some of the effects on the logos were a bit unnecessary.
• The music did not fit with the archive footage and calmer music may have been more suitable.
• The Buster Keaton video needs to be de-interlacing, and there were straight cuts through the footage which sometimes cut too soon. (Perhaps fades would be better for the transitions between each part of footage)
• The music sometimes ends abruptly and the cut at the end of the archive footage happened too soon.
• There was a bit too much Long Road students work, and the archive footage was meant to be the main footage showing.
• One Long Road video showed a dead body, this was not allowed as all videos had to be suited to all the public in terms of content, a dead body was a bit extreme to show to the general public. In my summary of notes I knew that concerning complaints, there were a few about visual quality, but Tony insisted you could see it all fine. Tony and the film trust took a gamble and due to this got a lot of publicity concerning the project.
From the production meeting I knew that in terms of feedback for Long Road, there were only 2 complaints, it was more the repetitive nature that annoyed some people, but overall there were not many complaints. In September the film trust would like to get people’s feedback and views, quotes etc.
The second and third show reels followed a more consistent pattern which was more liked. The public etc liked the moving logos, however the soundtrack seemed to be fluctuating, but this was only due to the speakers, and the only part doing this was the fashion show music. The level of sound was a little too loud – and this could be silent in the next programme if there are complaints. Overall, the show reel as a whole was a good achievement, despite the few improvements that would be made.
The footage was eye catching and interesting, so would ensure the public would stop and take a look as they walked past. The footage was organised well and was clearly explained throughout. With the improvements made, the show reel would be ready to show to the public, and hopefully would catch their attention.
My first 'Pilot' Showreel - 10th June
Tuesday, 9 June 2009
Changes to show reel after client feedback

With these adjustments, the show reel was made to suit Tony Jones (the client) and was edited more to his liking. I personally thought the show reel looked considerably better once the archive footage was changed a little, and the music was changed to suit the footage.
With the logos more subtle, the show reel focused on the actual footage rather than relying on effects to attract the audience. With more logos at the end rather than at the start, it was more organised and looked considerably better due to all of the adjustments made.
Tony Jones response & feedback to first show reel
After the first pilot show reel for the public, Tony Jones’ had various responses, and a few improvements I could make in order to make the video better for the public.
- He wanted the Buster Keaton video shortened, and to have the idea of Kylie Minogue coming out from one of the shops in the Buster Keaton video. However this was a bit too much so I simply merged the two videos together - so Kylie Minogue followed straight after Buster Keaton.
- After the discussion about too many titles, Tony Jones wanted to tone down the titles, and have them more subtle. He wanted more of Dave’s ‘Peoples Cinema’ title, and he felt there were too many logos at the start, so the class simply had the Long Road logo and the Cambridge Film Trust at the start - all the remaining logos went at the end of the show reel.
- He also felt the soundtrack to the archive footage was too lively, the same as what we felt from watching the rough cut footage.
- He felt the archive footage of punting was too ‘touristy’ for Cambridge, and to have more shops of town and Fitzroy street. With these adjustments, the show reel was made to suit Tony Jones (the client) and was edited more to his liking.
- The show reel looked considerably better once the archive footage was changed a little, and the music was changed to suit the footage. With the logos more subtle, the show reel focused on the actual footage rather than relying on effects to attract the audience.
- With more logos at the end rather than at the start, it was more organised and looked considerably better due to all of the adjustments made.
Archive footage - personal opinion

Monday, 8 June 2009
Pilot show reel - material analysis

